From afcf3d6497a5fb98329451f25bb497434532487a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: fukachan Date: Sun, 27 Jul 2003 18:11:40 +0000 Subject: clea up --- fml/doc/en/tutorial/overview/fml.sgml | 86 +++++++++++++++++++---------------- fml/doc/en/tutorial/overview/ml.sgml | 15 +++--- 2 files changed, 56 insertions(+), 45 deletions(-) diff --git a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/overview/fml.sgml b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/overview/fml.sgml index b8641166..badbb82b 100644 --- a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/overview/fml.sgml +++ b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/overview/fml.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ @@ -28,21 +28,22 @@ - usage of CUI is same as one unser &fml4; . - You can use CUI(makefml and fml command) - to create/remove ML, - to add/remove/change addresses of ML members, - to add/remove/change address of remote administrators, - to see logs, - to see member list + usage of CUI is almost same as one of &fml4; + (it is same as could as possible). + You can use CUI (makefml and fml command) + to create/remove an ML, + to add/remove/change an addresse of ML members, + to add/remove/change an address of remote administrators, + to see log and member list, et.al. + Makefml and fml are same programs except for argument order. CGI interface. - The functions are a subset of CUI. + The functions are a subset of CUI ones. @@ -84,14 +85,15 @@ - thread track system. + tiny thread track system. - built-in HTML converter of articles. + built-in module for HTML converter of articles. + support automatic conversion by default. @@ -147,10 +149,11 @@ -You run GNU autoconf firstly, and "make install". It is standard in -the world of open sources. This procedure is not similar to &fml4; -installation steps. It confuses you but it is friendly for package -systems of free unix like systems. +You run GNU autoconf firstly, and "make install". It is standard in +the world of open sources. This procedure is different from &fml4; +installation steps. It may confuse you if you are customered with +&fml4; But &fml8; is more friendly for package systems of free unix +like systems. @@ -161,14 +164,14 @@ and editing of configuration files: /usr/local/etc/fml/main.cf and -/usr/local/etc/fml/site_default_config.ph. +/usr/local/etc/fml/site_default_config.cf. -Suppse we craete a new ML named elena ML (elena@fml.org). +Suppose we create a new ML named elena ML (elena@fml.org). The brief flow of installation is as follows: @@ -177,7 +180,7 @@ The brief flow of installation is as follows: - download &fml8; source and expand it. + Download &fml8; source and expand it on the disk. @@ -185,14 +188,14 @@ The brief flow of installation is as follows: - install by user root. + Install it by user root. Firstly, change user to "root" and create the user "fml" and the group "fml". Secondly, run configure - and "make install". + and "make install". % su root @@ -204,7 +207,10 @@ The brief flow of installation is as follows: - By default, installer installs utility programs to + By default, + main programs such as distribute, command, et.al. are installed into + /usr/local/libexec/fml/. + Also, installer installs utility programs to /usr/local/bin. @@ -216,13 +222,21 @@ The brief flow of installation is as follows: These are wrappers to call real programs at /usr/local/libexec/fml/. + + + Perl modules are installed into + /usr/local/lib/fml/$fml_version/ + and message templates et.al. are installed into + /usr/local/share/fml/$fml_version/. + + - change user to "fml", create elena ML. + Change user to "fml", create elena ML for test. % su fml @@ -247,7 +261,7 @@ Both are same except for the syntax. - test. + Test. @@ -255,7 +269,7 @@ Both are same except for the syntax. - cutomize. + Cutomize your ML. @@ -265,7 +279,7 @@ Both are same except for the syntax. Please install by user root. -It is differ from &fml4;. +It is different from &fml4;. @@ -279,7 +293,7 @@ It is differ from &fml4;. -create an ML by CUI (makefml). +Create an ML by CUI (makefml). To create elena@fml.org ML (fml.org is the default domain), run @@ -294,9 +308,8 @@ for more details. -Instead, consider a virtual domain nuinui.net. -In this case, specify the whole address. -To create an ML elena@nuinui.net, run the following: +In the virtual domain case, specify the whole address as an argument. +For example, to create an ML elena@nuinui.net, run the following command: % su fml % makefml newml elena@nuinui.net @@ -365,7 +378,7 @@ BUT NOT yet implemented. -Edit files anyway. +Edit configuration files anyway. @@ -401,17 +414,14 @@ below. -To customize elena ML, edit -/var/spool/ml/elena/config.cf -file. -The format is a little modified postfix style. -It is differ from both &fml4;'s config.ph and cf. +To customize elena ML, edit /var/spool/ml/elena/config.cf file. The +format is a little modified postfix style. It is different from both +&fml4;'s config.ph and cf. -Add or modify the least variables. -If unspecified, the default value is used. -The default value depends fml version and is defined at +Add or modify the least variables. If unspecified, the default value +is used. The default value depends fml version and is defined at /usr/local/etc/fml/defaults/${fml_version}/default_config.cf diff --git a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/overview/ml.sgml b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/overview/ml.sgml index 45d9e2d6..f62408d8 100644 --- a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/overview/ml.sgml +++ b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/overview/ml.sgml @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ @@ -18,8 +18,9 @@ Email is an electirc version of mail. -One email has the following structure: the former is the header, the -latter is the body. The separator is one null line (empty line). +One email has the following structure which consists of two parts. +The former is the header, the latter is the body. The separator +between them is one null line (empty line). From: rudo@nuinui.net To: kenken@nuinui.net @@ -42,10 +43,10 @@ See RFC822 and RFC2822 for more details of definitions. -Mailing list (ML) is forwarding mechanism of email. -The program to do it is called as an ML driver. -An ML driver receives the email injected via MTA over the network, -copy it and redistributes it to ML members. +Mailing list (ML) is forwarding mechanism of email. The program for it +is called as ML driver. ML driver receives the email injected via MTA +over the network, copy and redistributes it to members subscribed to +the ML. -- cgit v1.2.1