clean up

5 files changed, 32 insertions, 31 deletions

diff --git a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/chapter.sgml b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/chapter.sgml
index 2662b58a..78005cf3 100644
--- a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/chapter.sgml
+++ b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/chapter.sgml
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 <!--
-   $FML: chapter.sgml,v 1.3 2003/08/02 03:05:53 fukachan Exp $
+   $FML: chapter.sgml,v 1.4 2005/07/20 10:37:41 fukachan Exp $
    $jaFML: chapter.sgml,v 1.7 2002/12/25 11:50:42 fukachan Exp $
 -->
 
 <chapter id="fml.command.modules">
 	<title>
-	Command (command mail, CUI and GUI)
+	Command (Command Mail, CUI And GUI)
 	</title>
 
 
diff --git a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/dataflow.sgml b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/dataflow.sgml
index 37d1976b..d0cce180 100644
--- a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/dataflow.sgml
+++ b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/dataflow.sgml
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 <!--
-   $FML: dataflow.sgml,v 1.3 2003/08/02 03:05:53 fukachan Exp $
+   $FML: dataflow.sgml,v 1.4 2005/07/20 10:37:42 fukachan Exp $
    $jaFML: dataflow.sgml,v 1.1 2002/12/25 11:50:42 fukachan Exp $
 -->
 
 
 <sect1 id="fml.command.dataflow">
 	<title>
-	Data flow of command request processing
+	Data Flow Of Command Request Processing
 	</title>
 
 
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ processing stage.
 
 <sect2>
 	<title>
-	command mail procssing
+	Command Mail Procssing
 	</title>
 
 <caution>
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ We adopt new frame work after 2004/03/05.
 </caution>
 
 <para>
-Firstly, parse and analyze each line.
+Firstly, parse and analyze each line in one message.
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -47,20 +47,21 @@ For example,
 </para>
 
 <para>
-1) if anonymous command such as "guide" or "subscribe", call command
-processor.  Allowd list of commands are defined in
-$anonymous_command_mail_allowed_commands.
+1) if this command matches anonymous command such as "guide" or
+"subscribe", call command processor. Allowd list of commands are
+defined in $anonymous_command_mail_allowed_commands.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-2) if a normal command which are allowd for a member, check other
-conditions based on rules of $command_mail_restrictions.  Allowd list
-of commands are defined in $user_command_mail_allowed_commands.
+2) if this command matches a normal command which are allowd for a
+member, check other conditions based on rules of
+$command_mail_restrictions.  Allowd list of commands are defined in
+$user_command_mail_allowed_commands.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 Command dispatcher checks the return path dependent on the command and
-the syntax, finally execute the command via FML::Command class.
+the syntax, finally executes the command via FML::Command class.
 This process runs as normal user priviledge.
 </para>
 
diff --git a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/extension.sgml b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/extension.sgml
index 3c10fa11..ab910912 100644
--- a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/extension.sgml
+++ b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/extension.sgml
@@ -1,18 +1,18 @@
 <!--
-   $FML: extension.sgml,v 1.2 2003/08/02 03:05:53 fukachan Exp $
+   $FML: extension.sgml,v 1.3 2005/07/20 10:37:42 fukachan Exp $
    $jaFML: extension.sgml,v 1.10 2003/04/15 14:51:36 fukachan Exp $
 -->
 
 
 <sect1 id="fml.command.hack.commandmail">
 	<title>
-	Command extension: command mail
+	Command Extension: Command Mail
 	</title>
 
 
 <warning>
 <para>
-To make a new command usable for all ML's on this host, 
+To make a new local command usable for all ML's on this host, 
 you need to put the module you wrote at
 <screen>
 /usr/local/lib/fml/site_local/
@@ -31,11 +31,11 @@ where $ml_home_dir = /var/spool/ml/elena.
 
 <sect2>
 	<title> 
-	Create a new user command
+	Create A New User Command
 	</title>
 
 <para>
-Consider to make a new user command "uja".
+Consider to make a new local user command "uja".
 Pick up a command at FML::Command::User, cut and paste it.
 Please put it at
 <screen>
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ user_command_mail_allowed_commands += uja
 
 <sect2>
 	<title> 
-	Create a new admin command such as "admin uja"
+	Create A New Admin Command Such As "admin uja"
 	</title>
 
 <para>
@@ -84,12 +84,12 @@ admin_command_mail_allowed_commands += uja
 
 <sect1 id="fml.command.hack.makefml">
 	<title>
-	CUI command extension: makefml/fml
+	CUI Command Extension: makefml/fml
 	</title>
 
 <warning>
 <para>
-To make a new command usable for all ML's on this host, 
+To make a new local command usable for all ML's on this host, 
 put the module you wrote at
 <screen>
 /usr/local/lib/fml/site_local/
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ of CUI implies administrator use.
 
 <sect1 id="fml.command.hack.cgi">
 	<title>
-	GUI command extension: CGI
+	GUI Command Extension: CGI
 	</title>
 
 
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ You need another work to create a menu screen.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-To make a new command usable for all ML's on this host, 
+To make a new local command usable for all ML's on this host, 
 put the module you wrote at
 <screen>
 /usr/local/lib/fml/site_local/
diff --git a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/internal.sgml b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/internal.sgml
index eb17c87d..a7872c48 100644
--- a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/internal.sgml
+++ b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/internal.sgml
@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
 <!--
-   $FML: internal.sgml,v 1.3 2004/03/12 14:05:04 fukachan Exp $
+   $FML: internal.sgml,v 1.4 2005/07/20 10:37:42 fukachan Exp $
    $jaFML: internal.sgml,v 1.6 2003/04/15 14:51:36 fukachan Exp $
 -->
 
 <sect1 id="fml.command.internal.change">
 	<title>
-	How differ coding style among &fml4; and &fml8;
+	How Differ Coding Style Among &fml4; And &fml8;
 	</title>
 
 <para>
-Consider "help" command as an example of an fml command,
-which sends back help message to the sender.
+Consider localization of "help" command as an example of an fml
+command, which sends back help message to the sender.
 </para>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/module.sgml b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/module.sgml
index 9493df06..912fdc4d 100644
--- a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/module.sgml
+++ b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/command/module.sgml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <!--
-   $FML: module.sgml,v 1.2 2003/08/02 03:05:53 fukachan Exp $
+   $FML: module.sgml,v 1.3 2005/07/20 10:37:42 fukachan Exp $
    $jaFML: module.sgml,v 1.4 2003/04/15 14:51:36 fukachan Exp $
 -->
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ $command is the specified command name.
 
 <sect2>
 	<title>
-	User command in command mail
+	User Command In Command Mail
 	</title>
 
 <para>
@@ -50,11 +50,11 @@ confirmation before the real subscription process runs.
 
 <sect2>
 	<title>
-	Admin command (administrative command in command mail)
+	Admin Command (Administrative Command In Command Mail)
 	</title>
 
 <para>
-call FML::Command::Admin::$command for $command via FML::Command
+It calles FML::Command::Admin::$command for $command via FML::Command
 via FML::Process::Command.
 </para>