clean up

3 files changed, 23 insertions, 24 deletions

diff --git a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/message/chapter.sgml b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/message/chapter.sgml
index 95cdb65d..d8038162 100644
--- a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/message/chapter.sgml
+++ b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/message/chapter.sgml
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 <!--
-   $FML: chapter.sgml,v 1.1 2003/07/28 15:20:18 fukachan Exp $
+   $FML: chapter.sgml,v 1.2 2003/08/03 05:28:49 fukachan Exp $
    $jaFML: chapter.sgml,v 1.5 2003/04/15 14:51:42 fukachan Exp $
 -->
 
 <chapter id="mail.manipulation">
 	<title>
-	Manipulate message (mail message)
+	Manipulate Message (Mail Message)
 	</title>
 
 <para>
@@ -22,16 +22,16 @@ Mail::Bounce, Mail::Delivery depend on this class.
 <!-- ======================================= -->
 <sect1>
 	<title>
-	Mail::Message class
+	Mail::Message Class
 	</title>
 
 <para>
 A mail consists of one header and one body.
-A multipart mail consists of several parts.
+A multipart mail body consists of several parts.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-The mail delivery needs not to know the detail of a message.
+The mail delivery module needs not to know the detail of a message.
 But the filter system needs to know the structure of the message.
 </para>
 
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ These modules depend
 Mail::Message class
 </link>
 to know the message structure.
-For eample, Mail::Bounce, Mail::Delivery et.al. uses this.
+For example, Mail::Bounce, Mail::Delivery et.al. use this class.
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ The usage is as follows:
 <!-- ======================================= -->
 <sect1>
 	<title>
-	Mail::Message::Parse class
+	Mail::Message::Parse Class
 	</title>
 
 <para>
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ class.
 <!-- ======================================= -->
 <sect1>
 	<title>
-	Mail::Message::Compose class
+	Mail::Message::Compose Class
 	</title>
 
 <para>
diff --git a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/message/discussion.sgml b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/message/discussion.sgml
index 0491d830..0d89637d 100644
--- a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/message/discussion.sgml
+++ b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/message/discussion.sgml
@@ -1,15 +1,15 @@
 <!--
-   $FML: discussion.sgml,v 1.1 2003/07/29 12:13:55 fukachan Exp $
+   $FML: discussion.sgml,v 1.2 2003/08/03 05:28:49 fukachan Exp $
    $jaFML: discussion.sgml,v 1.4 2003/04/15 14:51:42 fukachan Exp $
 -->
 
 <sect1>
 	<title>
-	Discussion: how to send back language dependent error mesages
+	Discussion: How To Send Back Language Dependent Error Mesages
 	</title>
 
 <para>
-Fml needs to send back language dependent error messages.
+fml needs to send back language dependent error messages.
 How we should implement it ?
 </para>
 
@@ -21,11 +21,11 @@ How we should implement it ?
 <!-- ===================================================== -->
 <sect2>
 	<title>
-	&fml4; case
+	&fml4; Case
 	</title>
 
 <para>
-In the case of &fml4;, &fml4; call language dependent message
+In the case of &fml4;, &fml4; calls language dependent message
 converter like this:
 <screen>
    Mesg(*e, KEYWORD, DEFAULT MESSAGE, ARGUMENT);
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ For example, the keyword not_found matches not_found entry in
 <!-- ===================================================== -->
 <sect2>
 	<title>
-	What &fmldevel; should do ?
+	What &fmldevel; Should Do ?
 	</title>
 
 <para>
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ For example, the usage is as follows:
 <screen>
 printf(catgets(catd, 30,  4,  "%s: Internal match error.\n"), progname);
 </screen>
-This function uses se 30 and entry 4 in the local definition file such
+This function uses set 30 and entry 4 in the local definition file such
 as /usr/pkg/share/nls/ja_JP.EUC/PROGNAME.cat.
 </para>
 
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ as /usr/pkg/share/nls/ja_JP.EUC/PROGNAME.cat.
 
 <sect3>
    <title>
-   &fmldevel;: design (temporary ?)
+   &fmldevel;: Design (Temporary ?)
    </title>
 
 <para>
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ $sender is ... something ...
 _EOF_
 }
 </screen>
-hmm, is it good ???
+Hmm, is it good ???
 </para>
 
 </sect3>
diff --git a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/message/language.sgml b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/message/language.sgml
index 7b98a921..76a5f41e 100644
--- a/fml/doc/en/tutorial/message/language.sgml
+++ b/fml/doc/en/tutorial/message/language.sgml
@@ -1,13 +1,12 @@
 <!--
-   $FML: language.sgml,v 1.1 2003/07/29 12:13:55 fukachan Exp $
+   $FML: language.sgml,v 1.2 2003/08/03 05:28:50 fukachan Exp $
    $jaFML: language.sgml,v 1.5 2003/04/15 14:51:42 fukachan Exp $
 -->
 
 
 <sect1 id="message.nl">
 	<title>
-	Message internationalization: a
-	the usage of reply_message_nl()
+	Message Internationalization: The Usage Of reply_message_nl()
 	</title>
 
 <para>
@@ -39,10 +38,10 @@ reply_mesage_nl().
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Usual $VARIABLE is also expaned by replacing it with value of config.cf.
-For example, $ml_name is expanded to ML name defined in config.cf.
-$_arg_ prefix is used for lexical scope variables to avoid
-conflicts against variables in config.cf.
+Usual $VARIABLE is also expaned by replacing it with value of config
+name space.  For example, $ml_name is expanded to ML name defined in
+config.cf. In fact $_arg_ prefix is used for lexical scope variables
+to avoid conflicts against variables in config.cf.
 </para>
 
 </sect1>